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[Duck EXTREME Dress-up]

Hmmm...

I suggest you put more effort into something like this, make it a bit more fun for people to enjoy.

I'm only saying it since there is little to do, and that there is little to give constructive critism for.

All in all, this is a dress up game. You're one of many doing the same thing, try doing something innovative and dynamic without crossing any lines.

I'm giving you a zero, for all you seem to have done is copy and paste codes, draw little doodles, and put a picture of a duck.

Now ducks are cool, but do something interesting and that'll keep us playing for more than 5 seconds.

This is a tough thing to do, but if you intend to continue making these I suggest you do so. Make something awe inspiring. That is all.

Good luck on future endeavors.

ookpaia responds:

thanks =)

[MOAPAC - Episode 1]

Pretty good

That was pretty good, you just need to tighten up your jokes a little.

RhysMus responds:

indeed i shall :D

[Home - School]

Fair

This was fairly good, not incredible. It was however a good concept, keep up with the stories. Some voices would be nice, even if it is just the main character's thoughts.

I'd say that you should practice more with the artwork, practice on some perspective (a lack of this can really hurt the quality of an animation), and generally put some more emphasis on movement with people, cars, etc.

I'm not going to expect you to be capable of amazing feats when you're just on your first I know, but I'm not going to dishonest and overly puff you up with hot air known as praise.

You've done fairly good for a first, just be sure to practice on your artwork a bit more.

Keep up the good work. :)

JohnLorique responds:

Thanks for advices)

[Ninja vs Pirate]

Alright, you got a base to work on. Now refine it.

Alright, you have a basic concept of what it is you want to do. It is not great, in terms of the art and having choppy animation with lack of sound, color, etc.

HOWEVER! This is a good start as a story board, or as a foundation for an animation idea. Work with this idea a bit more, making the animation smoother and a bit more enjoyable. It isn't anything spectacular, but its a start. Keep on working on it, and then refine it. Even if you're doing this for fun, try and turn this into something better.

This may take some time to do, don't worry and be patient. For a first animation you showed some guts and did more work on your first than I've seen some other people do. Or myself for that matter ^^;

Keep at it, and you'll find yourself onto bigger and more dynamic projects yet!

Keep up the hard work! :D

Lare responds:

Thanks for those kind words. I'll try to improve my upcoming flashes.