geoxen's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Slick Nick - Private Dick]

Cheesy, but fabulous!

Aaron, this was great! Really enjoyed this animation of yours, it was really good.

Keep it up, I'll be waiting for your next animation :D

[Crazy Laws:Delaware/Idaho]

Visuals?

Just having some fact typed out, only to change into another fact is not an animation. Animations are about visuals, forums are for what you're doing here.

If you can't draw, or don't wish to then ask someone to help.

Better luck next time.

[MOAPAC - Episode 1]

Pretty good

That was pretty good, you just need to tighten up your jokes a little.

RhysMus responds:

indeed i shall :D

[There She Is!! step4]

Wow

This was good, like the turn this takes.

After all, if everyone has been against the two groups being together why should they let them slide?

So I like the tension you've been building up in the series, that let itself out like this. It is unfortunate to see the characters we've come to know suffer, but it is reality. That's why I've enjoyed this episode, you made us realize that this world our characters live in can be just as cruel as it is beautiful.

Besides, it'd be to easy for the relationship to end happily. Society always has to input something when its feels it has been tipped, this is great story development.

Can't wait for the next installment :)

Keep up the fantastic work! :D

[Martin the Spartan]

Here, here

Movie was indeed too slow, artwork was good though.

But slow... need to make it draw the viewer in more.

I'm seeing a lot of influence from Samurai Jack, no?

[Home - School]

Fair

This was fairly good, not incredible. It was however a good concept, keep up with the stories. Some voices would be nice, even if it is just the main character's thoughts.

I'd say that you should practice more with the artwork, practice on some perspective (a lack of this can really hurt the quality of an animation), and generally put some more emphasis on movement with people, cars, etc.

I'm not going to expect you to be capable of amazing feats when you're just on your first I know, but I'm not going to dishonest and overly puff you up with hot air known as praise.

You've done fairly good for a first, just be sure to practice on your artwork a bit more.

Keep up the good work. :)

JohnLorique responds:

Thanks for advices)

[Bereaved]

Well done!

This is well done, quite well done indeed.

The story and concept was great, and the way you portrayed it was fantastic.

The animation was a bit choppy, the turning of the head and so forth could use a few more frames. Overall though it was well done :D

Keep up the good work :)

[Dirty Joe]

Not bad

Pretty cool I'd say, there wasn't a whole lot of animation. However what you were going for was to show emptiness, something barren. So I'd say you did good there, you could've added in a tumble weed to really put emphasis on the issue.

I'd say you should tell the tale of Dirty Joe in his first episode, this seems more like an opening you'd see to the tale. Quite good though, I was impressed. I was a little disappointed when it ended so abruptly.

Otherwise keep it up, and I look forward to a continuation in the future :D